Wednesday 22 June 2016

Paragraphs





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Thursday 16 June 2016

100 Word Challenge Tommy


Attack on silent airfield

The most dangerous and biggest airfield has to defend an attack, will they survive?
With the Russian generals ready to strike, silent airfield was just a yellow airfield with black airplanes, violins and eaten away airplanes that swept across the sky in the past, but now they don't. The attack made loads of noise with the Russian Bears dropping bombs on the airfield, every plane was in the sky, but one, the V-749. A Russian plane that could blow the battlefield away. When the plane was launched, the sky got so bright, that it went black...

By Tommy

100 Word Challenge - Keira H

100 word challenge                                                                                                     Did you know I'm bright yellow like the simpson family. Well. I wasn't born yellow my family isn't even yellow. It’s because of my weird school!!! Slowly I turned yellow .I was playing with my toy airplane . I swept it across the room  then… I let go and CRASH strat into the yellow gunge filled villon. Gunge came crashing out all over me the teacher came in with a “ROAR”!!!. “Go outside and eat your lunch “said my teacher. But I've already eaten my lunch. Then mop this floor  like a maid would!!!!why? Because I want this floor tidy.
If I was the teacher I would of just tell me to get the cleaner to tidy this gunge.    
           The End
                         By Keira.h    

100 Word Challenge - Jessica

                            100  word   challenge

She  had  just  eaten  a  whole  big  bag  of  yellow  chips  and  then  swept  up  her Violin and started  playing.
Then  she  heard an  airplane   in   the   sky  so  she  looked  up,  blinded by the sun she trips up  and falls  on the road. The driver didn’t see her.
 She   broke  her   leg  very  badly  from  top  to  bottom.   10  stitches  in  her  leg , a yellow  cast  that  had pictures of airplanes  and violins  on the  cast.  
She felt  very  sorry  for  herself because   she couldn't  do   any  of  her sports like netball,swimming,dance,running club,soccer, and AFL. A few weeks later she went to get her cast off so it could  be  xrayed. It  had  healed so she was free of being stuck inside.
                                                                           THE END

By Jessica

100 Word Challenge - Ellie

    
100   word challenge

There, stuck in a big room,no doors,no windows.I then say”am I ever  going to get out of here?
All of a sudden a bucket of yellow paint with  an  airplane  on  it  appears,so… I pick it up and splash a little on the wall. there was a message on the wall that said “the air is going to get thinner  and thinner and thinner”I then think what does that mean, will it really happen??

I   hear a soothing sound of the violin and get swept into a dream...I woke up and couldn't move at all?I then feel the air pressure getting less  and less and less.Then...it goes BLACK…                     

 By  ellie :)